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--- policy [2014/07/18 00:52]
bpaddock Somethings -> Some things.
+++ policy [2014/07/18 01:20]
bpaddock Fixed grammer.
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 <WRAP info>** While there may be a few real doctors using this site
 the vast majority of the users have had no official training other
-than the training of hard knocks, and being screwed by the Medical
+than the training of hard knocks and being screwed by the Medical
 Establishment.  Some things found on Internet may harm you.  God gave
 you a mind, //use it//!**.</WRAP>
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 Keep it clean, treat others as you want to be treated, and we all get
-along.  If you can't we reserve the right to block your access to this
+along.  If you can't, we reserve the right to block your access to this
 site and remove anything that you may have posted.
 We encourage you to share your own medical story, or medical images,
-for others to learn from.  We will not condone doctor bashing, leads
+for others to learn from.  We will not condone doctor bashing, which leads
 to bad Karma for you, and lawyers for us.  We don't like lawyers, do
 you?  If you want an account to comment on [[:kpaddock:my_story|My
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 ===== 7. First Person =====
-Word for word count, Karen did write the majority of the information
+Word for word count, Karen did write the majority of the information in her story, so the site as a whole is written in the first person. Hubby spent over 26 years with Karen.  He has a good idea what she would have said in most cases, and has done, and continues to do, site development.
-in her story, so the site as a whole is written in the first person.
-Hubby spent over 26 years with Karen he has a good idea what she would
-have said in most cases, and has done, and continues to do, site development.
 ===== 8. Advertising =====